这是我雅思写作的练习记录，有请大佬帮我改，然后存在的问题我自己总结的。

H1大作文

H2极限运动 Extreme Sports

Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

大佬指导后：

As extreme sports are known by more and more younger people, they begin to have different opinions on its danger. Some people think it should be banned, while others think it is acceptable. In my opinion, extreme sports should not be banned.

The argument that extreme sports need to be banned is understandable. It may mislead some imitators who is not mature enough and does not have ability to distinguish right from wrong. In that case, they may perceive those cool things as the latest trend after they watch some extreme sports videos. As a result, it is highly likely that they will imitate what those extreme athletes do in some videos, which can easily lead to injury or even death of imitators.

As far as I am concerned, extreme sports do not need to be banned. Firstly, extreme sports is a kind of exercise so it can help you build up your body. Furthermore, advocating extreme sports can carry forward the spirit of perseverance and courage of it. Extreme sports should be publicized to the public in a correct way, rather than being blindly and absolutely banned.

Therefore, we should take some steps to guide people to participate in extreme sports correctly at the same time. Firstly, the media should avoid excessive publicity of extreme sports on TV or the Internet, and should not just blindly emphasize the stimulation of extreme sports and talk little about the danger of extreme sports. By this mean can prevent people from incorrectly imitating. Moreover, the relevant department should set up partitions and warning signs for extreme sports to prevent extreme sports enthusiasts from injuring others. Last but not least, extreme sports enthusiasts should take good personal protection during exercise, such as wearing helmets or knee pads, which can better protect themselves from injury.

In conclusion, blindly and absolutely banning extreme sports is not the best solution. We need to correctly guide people to participate in extreme sports. By doing so can not solely show our respect to extreme sports but also protect the safety of amateurs.

H2政府修建铁路 Governments should spend money on railways

Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

大佬指导后：

With the financial deficiency among some countries, governments are required to consider how their fund should be allocated between railways and roads. Some people think that roads need more money to be developed, but as far as I am concerned, advantages of paying more money on railways outweigh on roads.

If a government spend more money on railways, people's standard of living would be improved. Citizens can take trains to another city or province in a short period, instead of costing time on roads commuting. If there were no railways, it is highly likely that people find it inconvenient to move to another places. This is because traveling on roads would take longer for those who have long journey, greatly running out of people's energy and time.

Another benefit is that trains are able to improve the transport efficiency. Compared with those roads vehicles such as trucks and cars, trains have much bigger capacity thus goods can be delivered sooner. Not only would the efficiency of goods transportation be greatly improved, but also they would promote the development of local tourism.

On the flip side, the argument that governments should attach significance to spending money on road construction is understandable. Wider roads and more advanced roads facilities mean that citizens can easily and conveniently commute from their home to their workplaces. On top of that, they can promote the appearance of a city, especially considering that they would be an important factor to be appealing to tourists thus promoting trade. However, roads still have obvious disadvantages in long-distance travel and heavy transportation and it is difficult to achieve those two points even if the government invests too much money.

In conclusion, governments should value both railways and roads' development, but I believe that railways deserve more money to bring more advantages than roads. This is because railways enable remote journey and transportation achieved more efficient than roads.

H2孩子零花钱 A smaller amount of money to children

Some people say that giving a smaller amount of money weekly to children will help them become more capable as they grow older. Do you agree or disagree?

大佬指导后：

There are opinions divided on whether children's capacity would be built or not by providing them less pocket money every week. Some people reckon that giving more money weekly to their kids will achieve the objective, but as far as I am concerned, more pocket money would bring some disadvantages to shape children's competence through years.

It might become more difficult to educate children to be financially independent by bringing them more money. As the economics developing rapidly these years, the next generation can be satisfied of the material need thus they would be not sensitive enough to prices. As a result, they would not realize the relations between earning money and paying, and the significance of economic independence. If parents do not impose restrictions on the amount of pocket money, their children would not perceive that the process of earning money is not easy. Therefore, those who are used to spending more money every week may loss their capacity in terms of growing towards economic independence.

Another downside of giving children more money is that their children would form a bad financial habit. Juveniles usually have no much self-controlling ability over money and have no idea about what to buy, and what to not buy. When children have more pocket money every week, they are highly likely to purchase those unnecessary products that deeply attract them, such as toys and snacks in the store. Therefore, there is a tendency that children spend most of their money. This behavior has an adverse impact on children's savings in adulthood.

In conclusion, I believe that parents should give children less money as they grow older since this not only are beneficial to being financially independent, but also can help children form a good financial habit.

H2新型产品

In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way.

Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

范文：

There is now a variety of products that are underlined artfully as new and fresh goods by some commercial advertisement. I reckon that the trend is advantageous in order to help marketing and corporation develop further.

The reasons causing the phenomenon might involve several various aspects. To begin with, merchants advertise products new to the public in order to pursue the improvement of profit. This is because newfashioned and new-style products could grasp those who are obsessed with chasing fashion thus increasing earnings. Moreover, it is undeniable that people are likely to compare with each other from the perspective of popularity thus launching new goods could meet some people's satisfaction. For example, young people who deny the prevailing clothes and foods may be considered outdated by their peers. Therefore an advertisement highlighting a shirt with a new-type design is able to create a trend of popularity and consequently gains such customer acquisition on this background.

As far as I am concerned, this kind of intentional operation is desirable. This is mainly because the benefits can scatter across a great number of enterprises. Driven by a market demand of valuing new products, more industrial firms would regard the incentive of innovation as important. As a result, the development of technology would be given an impulse from the product update, and goods' quality and practicability would be also improved. Therefore, not only is the advertising technique a promotor of technical progress but also it is a producer of economics for society.

In conclusion, the existence of a commercial model that advertises goods new in some way is caused by different factors such as profits growth and market demand. I believe that this is a beneficial development contributing to the development of innovation and technology in many companies.

H2含糖产品

Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.

Do you agree or disagree?

范文：

As an increasing number of high-sugar goods is regarded as a threat to public health, some people believe that the price of products that have a high content of sugar should be raised to control people's sugar intake. I disagree with the opinion to some extent because it would cause more disadvantages rather than merits.

It is undeniable that raising the sweetened products' price can help reduce retail sales thus playing a role in lowering public sugar intake. This is because most people would consider their budget to decide their consumption bundles. If sugary products become more expensive, some people who have a limited budget would not buy them or buy fewer of them. However, this does not automatically mean that it does not have its own limitation and would not bring any drawbacks.

First of all, the more costly label may not work effectively on those who are from relatively affluent backgrounds. Considering the fact that the increase of sugary products' price is slight rather than significant, some people would not take the amount into their accounts. Apart from this, this would also bring some potential damages to the merchant benefit and even the market equilibrium. For instance, the dropped sugar sales may impact some small enterprises and manufacturers from losing their price competitiveness, regular customers and retail profit. Therefore, as far as I am concerned, under no circumstance should the sugary products' price be unthinkingly jacked up for the pure purpose of cutting the sales down.

In conclusion, although forcing up the sweetened products' price could help some people reduce the intake of sugar, this cannot go far with a series of challenges. I believe that making sugary products more expensive is not advisable because it may drive the market negatively with a slight gain.

H2无人驾驶

In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers.

Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

范文：

As technology has developed by leaps and bounds, the invention of driverless vehicles will become picturable in the future, while some debates about pros and cons of popularizing driverless vehicles come into view. As far as I am concerned, advantages that driverless vehicles can bring people outweigh the disadvantages.

On one hand, popularizing driverless car for general use is feasible and advisable. First of all, it is time-saving for people since they will not need to spend a lot of efforts getting a driving license any more thus saving their time. The time spent on training driving skills can be replaced by alternatives, such as developing some hobbies. Besides, those who are inferior in mobility, such as the elderly and disabled, may be more possible to travel to further destinations independently. Therefore, it is worthwhile to develop driverless vehicles.

On the other hand, popularizing driverless car for general use has some potential risks. The widespread use of driverless vehicles may cause a structural unemployment of current drivers. Moreover, development, production and market entry of driverless vehicles require a significantly large amount of capital. If driverless vehicles are vigorously developed, it will increase the financial burden of the government, then the risk of government financial deficit.

I believe that these drawbacks can be modified by the effort of the government and scientists. The government should give the development of driverless vehicles more financial support and publish some policies aimed at transforming labor force from routine driving industry to new fields once the driverless vehicles come into service. Meanwhile, scientists will spare no effort to ensure the safety of using driverless vehicles by all means. For instance, specific roads will be built for driverless vehicles to lower the incidence of traffic accident.

In conclusion, with the effective regulation and governance, it is certain that the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages.

H1小作文

line graph、bar chart、pie chart

H2线图 1

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

按照范文更改：

The graph compares changes in the amounts of beef, lamb, chicken and fish consumed in a European country during the period 1979 to 2004.

In 1979 beef was the most popular among these foods, with about 225 grams per person per week. Lamb and chicken were eaten in similar quantities (around 150 grams), while much less fish was consumed (Just over 50 grams ).

However, during this 25-year period the consumption of beef and lamb fell noticeably to approximately 100 grams and 55 grams respectively. The consumption of fish also declined, but much less significantly to just below 50 grams, so although it remained the least popular food, consumption levels were the most stable.

The consumption of chicken, on the other hand, showed an upward trend, overtaking（超过） that of lamb in 1980 and that of beef in 1989. By 2004 it had increased to almost 250 grams per person per week.

Overall, the consumption of chicken has a noticeable rise while other foods saw an downward trend.

H2线图 2

范文：

The charts illustrate the usage rate of three different domestic appliances and the number of hours spent on housework in households per week during the one-century period between 1920 and 2019.

The proportion of refrigerators was jumped dramatically from almost nonexistence in the beginning to a full usage rate in 2000, becoming the greatest change among three factors, and the data was stablized lasting the last two decades. By contrast, that of washing machine increased the least by a 35% change over the years even though it experienced a slight decrease in the middle, while the percentage of vaccum cleaner has a stable growth from 30 to 100. Last but not least, it can be also found that a similar utilization rate which is around 50% was approached by all three appliances in the year 1940.

In terms of the housework hours, the time people spent on household chores each week dropped off during these years. Falling steadily from nearly 50 hours per week in 1920 to 20 hours in 2019, the data displayed an apparent decline which is relevant to the climbing usage rate of domestic appliances.

Overall, it is clear that the percentage of three kinds of electrical furniture all increased significantly during the 100-year period, while the time costed on housework weekly is shown as a noticeable drop.

H2扇形图 1

The charts present the findings of a survey aboutwhat British students considered when choosing a tertiaryinstitution in two different years.

The availability of suitable courses and degrees wasthe most important consideration in both years, althoughthe proportion of students who chose this factor droppedfrom 40% to 34%.The cost of education was the nextconsideration in 1982, mentioned by 28% of students, butthe figure decreased sharply to 5% in 2002. A similar trendwas seen in the attitude towards the distance to parentalhomes, with the figure declining from 19% to 16%.

Different patterns were seen in the changes to otherthree factors.The proportion of students who focused on thereputation of the university increased fivefold to 25%, whilethe percentage of those who valued the access to amenities

and sports facilities more than tripled to 18% in 2002. By comparison, only a fraction of respondents chose admissioncriteria (2% and 3% respectively in these two years). Overall,university applicants in the UK paid closerattention to suitable courses and degrees than to any otherfactor. The fame of a university and the access to amenitiesor sports facilities increased in importance, while the weightof other factors dropped or remained basically unchanged.

H1100 句翻译练习

1.Doing exercise often can improve people's confidence

Regular exercise can increase one's self-confidence

2.Education quality have a huge impact on students' grade

3.Parents and teachers should work hard to decrease children's time on TV

4.The economic slowdown has let to the increase of the rate of unemployment

5.The economic development requires young work force

6.People with a heavy workload do not have time to rest

7.In China, many students need to study at night

8.Heritage sites have been threatened due to the development of Cities

9.We should not overlook face-to-face communication

10.Some public services have problems in breaking even

11.We need to consider the social and economic environment

12.Intensive farming can pose a threat to bio-diversity

13.Educational equality can help students deal with problems of bad academic performance

14.Being exposed to different cultures can encourage creation

15.The government should attach more importance to welfare services, especially the medical service

16.Educaition might have decided people's job prospects.

17.Using fossil fuels can cause damage to the environment

18.Building a residential building helps deal with urban congestion

19.People from disadvantaged backgrounds can improve social status by hard working

20.Because of globalization, people need to work with people from different backgrounds

21.We need to adopt some measures to deal with some urgent problems

22.The media exaggerate victims' suffering in order to attract audience attention

23.Genetic engineering allows people to cultivate new crops species

24.Companies should provide maternity leave and other helps to female staff with children

25.An unhealthy lifestyle may put people in danger of illness.

26.Scholarships can encourage more students to study postgraduate courses.

27.The transformation of community provides criminals with opportunities to acquire vocational skills.（注意三单）

28.Laws should make drinking driving a criminal offense.

29.Rural areas provide people opportunities to leave far away from pressure and noises of modern life.

30.The aging population has prompted countries to raise the retirement age.

31.The government should provides some cities financial support to protect historic buildings.

32.Schools should allow teachers to use force to remove naughty children to leave the classroom.

33.Unemployment in rural areas can be solved by rural-to-urban shift to some extent.

34.High-rise buildings are sometimes considered as eyesore of the city.

35.The investment in space technology and science should be supported by government.

36.Historic relics have been preserved due to the historical importance.

37.The main purpose of the school activities which can give the children's a sense of achievement and improve their sense of happiness.

38.Some employees were encouraged to break the rules.

39.Because of traffic congestion, commuting time has been prolong.

40.Computer skills can be used to study and work.

41.Most of environmental damages all is attribute to human activities.

42.Many children are exposed to violent content every day.

43.The family environment is regarded as the most important factors on children's development.

44.With more and more young people participating in volunteer work, the cohesion of community will be strengthen.

45.Immigrants are sometimes regarded as a threat to social cohesion.

46.Young people who have not been exposed to high education can only get a low-skilled jobs.

47.Some people disapprove of genetically modified foods.

48.Tourism attractions spare no effort to satisfy tourists' needs and tastes.

49.In a highly competitive society, working adults are likely to focus on vocational development.

50.Perception of beauty varies from different cultures.

51.The aviation industry has developed at an fast pace over the past decades, because of the decline in costs.

52.Animal experiments are sometimes unable to examine side effects of drugs.

53.Hunting illegally causes to the death of some animals.

54.The influence of computers on communication skills are changed by ages.

55.Many girls are not willing to find jobs in a male-dominated world.

56.The main function of schools is to impart knowledge to the next generation.

57.The arts are not belong to the main course at school.

58.Many companies are unlikely to recruit new staffs because the economic outlook is not clear enough.

59.Air transport may release enormous greenhouse gases.

60.Children are likely to have behavioral problems.

61.The rapid population expansion is the main reason of the production of a large amount of waste.

62.Strict punishment is an effective measure to reduce crime.

63.Our environment is still terrible.

64.Because of the high rise of unemployment rate, college students feel under pressure to study hard.

65.Racial discrimination remains a serious problem.

66.Learning time tables by rote is not the best way to improve one's arithmetic skills.

67.Deprived countries' primary mission is to satisfy people's fundamental living needs.

68.The impact that genetic modified food has on health is still unknown.

69.Shopping online has already become an important part of people's daily life.

70.In the consumer society, people are no longer satisfying with bare necessities.

71.People's unhealthy lifestyle is the result that they tend to rely heavily on science and technology.

72.Poverty is the reason that the rise of crime in many communities.

73.The invention of electric cars is part of our efforts to protect the environmenmt.

74.It is very common for Chinese people to exchange lavish gifts.

75.In the next few decades, it is hard for us to preserve the plant diversity.

76.As people get older, they will find it hard to keep in touch with their friends and family.

77.Free tuition fees makes it possible for students from deprived backgrounds have the equal access to education.

78.Many people think it necessary to catch up fashion.

79.The decrease of funds makes many young people hard to receive a university education.

80.Sometimes, it's hard to evaluate the environmental cost made by human activities.

81.There are some economically deprived communities in big cities.

82.There is no clear link between grouping students by ability and their academic performance.

83.Using multimedia tools can improve students' concentration and make them interested in courses.

84.Celebrities' achievements encourage people to study hard and be brave

85.Opening new companies in developing countries can reduce the cost of production and increase huge profits.

86.A slight change in lifestyle can make a huge difference and reduce the environmental impact of our daily activities.

87.Because students have no internship chances, it is hard to improve vocational skills.

88.College students can not make enough money even if they have gained qualifications.

89.Because of the intense competition and development of technology, running a company now is a difficult mission.

90.The fact is, due to the mechanization, some jobs have been cut off.

91.It is true that many people today have chosen to go green and cut down on the use of energy.

92.A prison sentence can do harm to young people, because criminal record can leave them a big shadow on their career.

93.I believe there is a direct link between fast food advertisements and general obesity.

94.Money can be used for clean-up operation which can help create a comfortable environment.

95.It is necessary to put restrictions on those advertisements which encourage customers to buy more than they need.

96.Afforestation can help to improve air quality, which can reduce the risk of suffering health problems, such as the breathing problems.

97.The government should control those news reports which give an exaggerated account of some social problems.

98.It is the reason why many workers today suffer health problems.

99.Many workers are willing to work for companies where they can obtain promotional opportunities.

100.Many young people have chosen to study in English-speaking countries where they can study at some world famous universities.